Summary: Always be aware of why you're including a particular explanation, then reevaluate it to determine its value and don't be afraid to chop it if it's interrupting the information that's of true importance to your story.
Summary: Always be aware of why you're including a particular explanation, then reevaluate it to determine its value and don't be afraid to chop it if it's interrupting the information that's of true importance to your story.