Summary: Alex and Nick continue the 2020 Paper Team Mentorship with mentee Ben Warner, and the revised draft of his drama pilot THE PIRATE KING.<br> <br> Step five of the process: revising the first draft of the original pilot.<br> <br> We share our thoughts on Ben's revised draft.<br> <br> Content<br> 2020 Mentorship recap (00:00:45)<br> Discussion of "The Pirate King" revised draft (00:02:05)<br> <br> Links<br> <a href="https://www.tv-calling.com/ptmentorship/TPK%20-%20Revised%20Draft.pdf" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">"The Pirate King" revised draft</a><br> <a href="https://www.tv-calling.com/2020-paper-team-mentorship-i-the-pirate-king-overview-pt190/">2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - "The Pirate King" Overview (PT190)</a><br> <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/2020-paper-team-42610472">2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - Ben's Update</a><br> <a href="https://www.tv-calling.com/2020-paper-team-mentorship-ii-the-pirate-king-beat-sheet-pt193/">2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - "The Pirate King" Beat Sheet (PT193)</a><br> <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/2020-paper-team-43148577">2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - Ben's Update</a><br> <a href="https://www.tv-calling.com/2020-paper-team-mentorship-iii-the-pirate-king-outline-pt198/">2020 Paper Team Mentorship III – “The Pirate King” Outline (PT198)</a><br> <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/2020-paper-team-44947904">2020 Paper Team Mentorship III - Ben's Update</a><br> <a href="https://www.tv-calling.com/2020-paper-team-mentorship-iv-the-pirate-king-first-draft-pt201/">2020 Paper Team Mentorship IV - "The Pirate King" First Draft (PT201)</a><br> <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/2020-paper-team-45987153">2020 Paper Team Mentorship IV - Ben's Update</a><br> <br> <br> If you enjoy Paper Team, please consider supporting us on Patreon at <a href="http://paperteam.co/patreon">paperteam.co/patreon</a>! :)<br> <br> Special thanks to <a href="https://twitter.com/AlexSwitzky21">Alex Switzky</a> for helping us edit this episode.<br> <br> You can find Paper Team on Twitter:<br> Alex - <a href="https://twitter.com/TVCalling">@TVCalling</a><br> Nick - <a href="https://twitter.com/_njwatson">@_njwatson</a><br> For any questions, comments or feedback, you can e-mail us: ask@paperteam.co<br> <br>
